ZeoIsGone's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The world as we make it]

meh...

compress your music. I really don't like stick movies, but this one at least had somewhat of a story. Nice job, even for the unnecessarily large file size.

[Here I am]

Meh...

Ok now here me out... it was a great toon. In synce and the visual style was good the was the photo's moves and the stars behind. You have animation talent, I'll give you that. (thus the 5)... here are some things...

The sounth park thing wasn't HORRIBLE... and I understand that makin' up your own charicters is hard and all. But if you can... trying something origanal... If it was a south park parody or sumthing, it might work. But since it was unrealated, it might be a good idea to make your own guys for your own toons. Go to walmart and get a sketch book and just doodle, you'll come up with something eventually.

Another thing is the music... I understand that each funny song deserves a toon on NG. I've submited two toons and each had 100% OTHER PEOPLES audio. The only reason I decided to write this reveiw is because I LOVED the song. What I'd recomend to you is, on your future toons, don't make a habbit of just music vids or anything. I learned that and am in the middle of making more origanal toons... But I probably will still make music vids. Just make sure you try writing your own stuff too. Cause other wise you'll keep on getting half hearted votes. People like the comedy... but it's just depressing that it's not origanal ya know?

Good luck to ya man :-)
~!<ev (indeed)

[Boy: Episode One]

You simply stink

Boy is not in any way trying to copy David Firth. It is merely an addition to the "Creepy Flash" genre that he brought t life.

WELL, then it IS trying to copy david firth, trying to copy his style. Just cause you didn't try and draw saled fingers or burnt face man and make a toon about them, you still copyed his style of music, the horizon backround and the movie "glitches" and static that he does. The flash was pretty bad anyways. Don't try and ADD to his genre... get your own.

Hart-Productions responds:

Well you can fuck yourself.

[LitC]

W00t!

Much improved, Very good job. Continue to make cartoons Sir. Start writing storys too, so you can make flashes even better than this.

But really, great job at cleanin' it up and adding color.

[IAWSWIMA]

YES!!!

Great flash... only thing I'd recoment is no sticks... but Ur sticks had personality so I think it's ok

WHO DID THAT NUMA REMIX?!?!?! That was awesome! Did you do it? The credits said you did the music? For real? Is it in the audio protal? I want it! If it's not in the portal.. I strongly recomend sending it in dude!

nice flash too!

[Plastic Hammer Xtreem!]

woot

I don't really get the parody, but I still found it funny, so good job.

Only thing that might be cool, the backround for "more action" and so on, it was a gray with white lettes... make it #2F3238 it'll blend with the NG background and look really cool. Not REALLLY importaint and it's small, but it can make that little bit of difference to improve this flash expeirience at least on newgrounds

[Captain Heroic Ep. 2]

MY NAME IS A PUN!!!

I saw the first one when it first came to the portal too... WAY TO GO!!! Punisher... Punissuer... Oh man!!! haha! Keep 'em coming!

[Character Development]

meh...

I felt real bad blaming it... there's just no reason to keep it around.

You deffinitly could make killer movies, (and have, as I see)... so yeah, you're probably smart enough to know that we're not looking for pointless school projects on Newgrounds and you just submit it for the heck of it... try... try not doing that, and submit stuff with the intention of it becoming a popular, loved toon.

That's all I have to say about that...

[Randomation]

meh...

If you still had the FLA file, I'd say remebur to compres your music... to bad about this one but keep that in mind 4 next time

[ne Plus Ultra: Bette Noir]

meh...

A good Mcgiever parodey would be great... but this had no story, I don't know WHAT the title is supposed to mean, and the animation was sloppy and showed no effort.

Keep trying...

InoMan responds:

Oh, there is a story. The best is yet to come.