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Great idea! Wonderfully origanal and creative! two thoughts on it...

As you know, items drawn in flash can get as big or as small as they want and never lose quality. I see that eachtime it "switched" to a new theme, the "portal" so to speak turned into a JPG and was a litte shakey. What would be cool is if everything you wharped to the new computer, all the ones before it really did justb get smaller, insted of switching to pictures. I can imagen that would be harder, but it would make a better product.

Second thing is, you could have put in more thems and charicters to make the loop longer and more enjoyable. At the end of this flash, I'm thinking "heh, cool idea".... if you made more to go with these, people would be thinking "that was a great flash".

Haha

Rent.... hahahaha...

Nice randomness I guess, it was at least fun looking, an better than stick figures. You next step should be writing your own story and learning to do your own audio. Your flash talent is fine, work on making storys.

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meh...

Unoriganal idea. Seems a bit of a collapse knock off. The style of the little colored lizard things didn't match the style of the right hand side bar. It wasn't "fun" for me to play, but it was a weldone game. I recomend some kinda animated story inbetween levels ;)

OOOOOOHHHH....

Clock Crews gonna be mad @ you...

I wouln't make Hatefull toons about SB-clock... Just cause they do have a following and you'll get people razzed... It might be a cool to make a real funny parody, I havn't seen ANY good parodys of 'em, and Locks suck even more than the Clocks.

but thats just me... The game itself had lack of effort and seemed to just want to send a message than be a good game...

Couple things to improve the game:
Make the aim courser THINKER, it was hard to see on some of the backgrounds
Ad sound effects, One for when the gun shoots and one for when they hit.
Make the SB's blow up better, breaking apart into little waffles doesn't really look good. Make 'em shatter using the lassle tool, maybe they can even "splatter" on the background and then like, slide down a little before disapearing.
Maybe make the background animated, like a mini-toon in eachone. even if you don't do that, make more backgrounds, it got to repetitive.

Keep at it, Sir.

FatonWheels responds:

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huh...

When I'm blocking, high or low, I can aviod the attack compleatly by clicking "atack" for my self... glitch?

also, incluse 'instuctions" in your flash, no matter how simple they might seem to you, there are alota saps out there (like myself) that won't get it without being told

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