Score: 10

"YEAH!!!"

submission: Captain Heroic Ep. 4

date: June 21, 2005

I do believe I have voted on each issue of CH since it started. I love the series. Origanal, you're humor is great and your style is simple and effective, very idividual.

As far as this Episode goes... I was a bit disapointed... The Pun-issuer was probably the most creative villan ever... but then you went to this, some gay charicter. Putting a gay tone of voice with that guy really didn't make me laugh, barly anyone does. I would recomend trying to stear away from that cheep forum of comedy (it's almost as bad as vulger adult jokes)... but that's just what I would recomend, you didn't really do anything wrong, it just kinda let me down a little.

It didn't make sence why pun-issuer was hanging out with the fireman, it might have just been the style of randomness... but it would'a been cool if there was a reason he was there.

All in all, good toon--Keep 'em comin', Rockithon

~!<ev (indeed)

Score: 7

"That was GREAT!!!"

submission: rushed

date: June 16, 2005

lol, I make toons as b-day gifts too ;)

The begining seemed a little ruched... how the two frames switching back and forth implyed he was running. Now, I say you should draw the tree's out and then tween tehn being small and then growing larger as they come closer and pass the guy by. I saw how you looped those kinda things together to fill space... try and lake those loops longer so WE (the audiences) can barly tell it's a loop and thinks he really is running along a path and not walking in place.

That was a silly ending wasn't it? lol. Good job, keep at it too.

Score: 6

"dangeresqe?"

submission: Exploder II

date: June 16, 2005

Alot like dangeresqe... right down to the glasses...but not to bad. One thing I've learned is pay attention to detale. Your scales where a bit off and the style was pretty...sloppy? I guess? Just make sure you really take the time to make each thing look as good as the rest. Like how the main charister where more "drawn" that the sub-charicters. Try to get them looking like they all belong to the same style and animation story.

Good fun though,

Score: 0

"You simply stink"

submission: Boy: Episode One

date: May 20, 2005

Boy is not in any way trying to copy David Firth. It is merely an addition to the "Creepy Flash" genre that he brought t life.

WELL, then it IS trying to copy david firth, trying to copy his style. Just cause you didn't try and draw saled fingers or burnt face man and make a toon about them, you still copyed his style of music, the horizon backround and the movie "glitches" and static that he does. The flash was pretty bad anyways. Don't try and ADD to his genre... get your own.

Score: 3

"OOOOOOHHHH...."

submission: Shoot sb-clock

date: April 14, 2005

Clock Crews gonna be mad @ you...

I wouln't make Hatefull toons about SB-clock... Just cause they do have a following and you'll get people razzed... It might be a cool to make a real funny parody, I havn't seen ANY good parodys of 'em, and Locks suck even more than the Clocks.

but thats just me... The game itself had lack of effort and seemed to just want to send a message than be a good game...

Couple things to improve the game:
Make the aim courser THINKER, it was hard to see on some of the backgrounds
Ad sound effects, One for when the gun shoots and one for when they hit.
Make the SB's blow up better, breaking apart into little waffles doesn't really look good. Make 'em shatter using the lassle tool, maybe they can even "splatter" on the background and then like, slide down a little before disapearing.
Maybe make the background animated, like a mini-toon in eachone. even if you don't do that, make more backgrounds, it got to repetitive.

Keep at it, Sir.

Score: 9

"Alright"

submission: LinezX

date: April 10, 2005

I'm not a fan of mosy FBF's because of the obvious lack of story... tho I see that the overall reason FBFs can be cool is cause their wicked fun to just watch. The over use of "lines" bug me sumtimes... I thing more FBF's should be thicker, more detailed objects, but that would take more time...

In regaurds to this one, It honestly IS one of the best FBFs out there, but considering it's your first animation... You have an artistic eye which means a ton of potential, so make more animations and send 'em in. Just because it's what I like to see... I challenge you to work on writing good story's too for your toons, but that just something I like... even if anymation isn't the best, the story is what brings it home.

Keep at it, aim for a high batting adverage!

Score: 3

"meh..."

submission: ne Plus Ultra: Bette Noir

date: April 8, 2005

A good Mcgiever parodey would be great... but this had no story, I don't know WHAT the title is supposed to mean, and the animation was sloppy and showed no effort.

Keep trying...

Score: 5

"You're "watch again" button"

submission: Plans to Fuck Alexis 2

date: March 22, 2005

It broken... maybe you wanna fix.... lol, thanks for refering to me in your authors comments :-p No hard feelings :-p

Score: 0

"that's degradeing"

submission: Plans to Fuck Alexis

date: March 19, 2005

This is what the world's come too. Not only do guys not only respect girls anymore, it's all about sex. Not only where you degrading this girl buy puting her FULL name on the internet most likly without her permission AND while the whole time saying she'll have sex eaisly. I don't care if she's not even that nice of a girl, if you where a TRUE man, or even a true artist, you wouldn't steep so low. I know you're not, but you SHOULD be ashamed. I don't mean to lack "reveiwing" content... the animation itself was crap, but art always is sending a message... and the message I got is that you are obviously a horrible excuse of a guy. I pity that you don't respect girls more...

If you wanna be a jerk to this girl, keep it out of newgrounds...I'd be happy to see what CREATIVE kind's of animation you could bring.

Respectfully- ~|<ev (indeed)

Score: 3

"Don't make trailers"

submission: blackmagetale trailor

date: March 14, 2005

Just make the toon and hope THAT doesn't get blammed ya know? Besides.. you can only aford to have 3 movie blammed within' 30 days... so you just lost strike one.

The toon itself was kinda cool I guess.. But enless you're possitive you REALLY have somthing that will blow everyone away and make NG #1 for a good long time... Enless you're SURE you have a masterpeice... DON'T make a cheesy trailer... cause not one cares....

I'm looking forward to the real one :-)