Score: 10

"Rock on."

submission: Dont Try This At Home Vid

date: October 13, 2005

Ya know... I have a real passion for being a hero. I’m discovering and re-discovering what it is to be a one. I’ve wrestled with thoughts like…Is it one heroic act that makes you a hero forever? Or a chivalrous outlook on life that affects the way you go about doing things in a heroic manner? What does it take? One things for sure, it's a passion of mine... And man, was this song intense for me...

It kinda makes me think how this whole... desire to be a hero is something that maybe God put in many if not all of us guys. When we try to fill the desire in the fake ways we can end up feeling like a failure. I mean, think of where the guy writing this is coming from. There's only one thing worse than not doing YOUR best for you, and that's when you let someone else down... These lyrics just really stood out to me that way. Pfftt... I only hope it's never true of me.

Thanks for doing this, I may never had heard the song if it wern't for you.

The only thing I recomend to improve your skillz is make the background and setting the same style as you characters. Draw them the same way with the same tools, things will fit better then I think. I really enjoyed the shadows though on the frog there, so I can tell you have an eye for that sorta stuff. Keep at it, congratz on front page.

~Kev

Score: 6

"Meh"

submission: How Newgrounds Functions

date: July 22, 2005

Great idea! Wonderfully origanal and creative! two thoughts on it...

As you know, items drawn in flash can get as big or as small as they want and never lose quality. I see that eachtime it "switched" to a new theme, the "portal" so to speak turned into a JPG and was a litte shakey. What would be cool is if everything you wharped to the new computer, all the ones before it really did justb get smaller, insted of switching to pictures. I can imagen that would be harder, but it would make a better product.

Second thing is, you could have put in more thems and charicters to make the loop longer and more enjoyable. At the end of this flash, I'm thinking "heh, cool idea".... if you made more to go with these, people would be thinking "that was a great flash".

Score: 4

"Haha"

submission: Everyone has AIDS

date: June 23, 2005

Rent.... hahahaha...

Nice randomness I guess, it was at least fun looking, an better than stick figures. You next step should be writing your own story and learning to do your own audio. Your flash talent is fine, work on making storys.